lespaul4

"Do You Really Hurt"

my question for people who's whole lives revolve around depression, before they reach puberty.

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thelastkotani

Written Dec 26 2010, 11:40 PM

Such class i love the way you would kick some ass. So i give you and aplause for your poem its is down and straight forward. keep on writing this was good.

 Donahue

rae11

Written Nov 05 2010, 03:50 PM

hmm interesting..
I have to say it is well written and I liked it. I don't know what you've been through, but you always gotta respect other people and what they've been through. I could slam you and say you've been through nothing..because i've been through unimaginable things too. Don't lose respect in your writing. Some people are hurting and no one cares.

 Homer

julianhomer

Written Oct 31 2010, 05:19 AM

This is a really great poem. People moan about nothing.

 nemo

nemo

Written Oct 04 2010, 11:27 PM

if you're interested, I wrote something that might help get the idea of non-emo depression across --" 'You Can't Imagine it Unless You've Been There' "

 nemo

nemo

Written Oct 04 2010, 10:55 PM

umm
it definitely brings emotion
which is the point
and it's a valid annoyance, those tiny emo kids
but
not all depressives want to kill themselves
and just because you know you're being stupid
wasting your life away
doesn't mean you can change it

 C

releasing

Written Sep 16 2010, 11:27 PM

i love it.

 Abram

dulce

Written Sep 16 2010, 01:27 PM

This is good. The stanza could use some work, but it's decent.

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potentialthreat

Written Sep 14 2010, 08:32 PM

wow, let hell rain down on your umbrella ae? lol cool.

 Pelletier

adrienslife

Written Sep 14 2010, 07:35 PM

Live life man you deserve it

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ghostbear7

Written Sep 06 2010, 10:29 PM

This is so dark and interesting, its words pop out to me lol i likey!

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