You Already Do...

How far would you go to change for someone you loved to make them stay? Sure, everyone says that they'd be nicer, lose weight or dye their hair... but to become the human impossible? Came up with this while driving home the other day. I like it.

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Written Jan 03 2011, 11:36 PM

This is quite impressive work. It really captures a sense of romance and just a general aspect of love. The theme was what captured me. I also thought that the grammatic structure it was written in was good, you had a way of making the lines fit into each other so great job incorporating your lines. Overall, it was remarkable.



Written Apr 25 2010, 03:43 PM

Freakin loved it. I was grabbed at "Light behind your teeth" and the ending -- the last 7 lines or so are amazing.



Written Apr 13 2010, 11:43 PM

I liked it and read it again and again....



Written Apr 13 2010, 06:51 PM

Thanks for your comments!I really enjoyed this poem of yours!It's one of my favourites.