chicory

Death to the Sun

Just a short something on my mind. Not sure if it's truly finished, but it seems satisfied for the time being.

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 Pelletier

adrienslife

Written Aug 28 2010, 07:22 PM

Thats beatiful :)

 Gallardo

chiyan

Written Apr 15 2010, 12:03 AM

hey,this one's great
the verse is perfect and connects through with each other

 Tritz

chicory

Written Mar 27 2010, 10:51 PM

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

-C (teehee)

 Willow

bittersweet

Written Mar 27 2010, 02:52 PM

Your poems really are a breath of fresh air on this site (no offence everyone else- chicory is just very good)
I really enjoyed that, It painted a picture in my head, which I love to have when i'm reading something.

-B