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Tears falling....

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fabledbriar

Written Mar 05 2016, 05:56 PM

Beautiful and tender.

 Anon

lilac_wine

Written Mar 05 2014, 11:42 PM

This sums up taking the good with the bad fairly well. Perhaps more elaborate imagery would be beneficial as well.

For instance - how are they falling, why are the falling? Do they make a sound? What colour are the tears?

:)