imunique

Common/Uncommon thoughts.

Well.... this is my first attempt at writing poetry. Any sort of feedback will be welcomed. Have a good life!

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potentialthreat

Written Sep 16 2013, 08:18 PM

I feel it! I feel this poem. It's very broad but still quite relatable. Nice!

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poemboy

Written Sep 10 2013, 04:49 PM

Not bad for a first attempt not bad at all. My advice to help you, try to get more of a flow out of it, like a soft, easy, but meaningful flow. And thanks for joining deliric no one comes on anymore and we defiantly need more people to write, read and rate, and comment. ^_^