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Why Live?

Time of my greatest depressions thus far.

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potentialthreat

Written Sep 14 2011, 12:47 AM

Fucking perfect. Had you ever read something that tells the same story as how youve been feeling for years?
This is definatley one of my top favorites!! If not the most, and to critique further,I found the ideas within this poem intoxicating, like I was rolling around in a huge watery ball, sloshed this way and that, this IS fantastic indeed.

 Jones

sweetner218

Written Aug 29 2011, 04:03 PM

Suicide poems. Or suicide thoughts...Enthrall me
Being a depressed person myself I can relate.
I liked your wording. it was questionable. Not so bold to yell that you know all
But a question left lingering for all to ponder themselves♄
Fantastic work here:)

 Howard

talkalot9021

Written Aug 27 2011, 04:29 PM

Very deep. Great thought process. But yes, people do value your life over theirs.
I know all too well what it's like to think about death and what would happen if I died, or how I thought it might just be easier if I was gone, but obviously, I thought better of it, and myself. I'm not saying you're suicidal or anything, but you should definitely consider the greatness you can experiance in life.
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