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 Elizabeth

taytay

Written Feb 22 2012, 03:52 PM

Nothing to say but this is truly great. Flawless :)

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sandrao

Written Sep 23 2011, 01:29 AM

i loooove!!...some grammatical errors present, but the message is totally there...and i adore the surreal nature of this.

 Martin

fatal_heart

Written Jul 12 2011, 09:14 PM

Wonderful poem. I enjoyed it. I felt the emotion starting with the first line. Very visual.

 F

bless

Written May 26 2011, 07:29 AM

wow, i luv this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very relative
keep it up

 Kaiser

mmsk

Written May 21 2011, 10:52 PM

This depresses me. Not because of the content, but more due to the lack there of.

 Whitman

9273

Written May 19 2011, 08:33 PM

 Murphy

erinheartspoems

Written May 19 2011, 03:21 PM

Hum amazing much? I rly liked this poem. Great work :)

 Lottermain

realcoolperson

Written May 18 2011, 06:23 PM

bored... :O

 Johnson

hotmess911

Written May 18 2011, 06:10 PM

The rythem was amazing:) This is very interesting:) I love it:]

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miki_luvs_poetry

Written May 18 2011, 05:48 PM

this is really good. like amazing. wow like i dont even know how you write like that! ah-mazing. really:)