Erika Tritz (chicory)

chicory

Erika Tritz

28 years old
Member since Oct 16, 2008
Writes from , United States
Has read texts.
Has written 231 comments.
First off, I would like to say how amazing it is to find this site still up and running nearly 6 years after I last visited here! (Though dead by the looks of it.) It's been ages since I last posted anything. I haven't done much in the way of poetry as of late, but I do write very prose driven fictional pieces now for fun. Though if I'm being honest, I write a ton of fanfiction.

For any that remember me from ages back, I did end up getting my degree in English, with focuses on history, grammar, and rhetoric. I also have a degree in art now too.

All in all, I'd like to start sharing a few pieces again. And, for now, I will leave up my old work to read over. Maybe I've progressed in the last few years. Maybe I've gotten worse.

Keep writing. When all else fails, put it in words.


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purplicious21

Written Jan 03 2011, 11:36 PM in You Already Do...

This is quite impressive work. It really captures a sense of romance and just a general aspect of love. The theme was what captured me. I also thought that the grammatic structure it was written in was good, you had a way of making the lines fit into each other so great job incorporating your lines. Overall, it was remarkable.

Adrien Pelletier

adrienslife

Written Aug 28 2010, 07:22 PM in Death to the Sun

Thats beatiful :)

Jessie Howard

talkalot9021

Written Aug 20 2010, 02:09 PM in And the body screams its discontent...

this was absolutely amazing. it captured how ifeel at the moment almost spot on.
i loved it.

Faye Estelen

frezbo

Written Jun 20 2010, 02:43 AM in Simple Sake of Sleep

Hi there Erika, it's been quite a while!
This is an amazing poem, some fantastic lines in here (they made me realise how much I've been missing from Deliric!). Hope you're alright, I can see your poetry is as good as ever :)

Naomi Scheel

naomilinn

Written Jun 18 2010, 10:40 PM in Simple Sake of Sleep

Thank you for the comment!
I liked the first part the most, but i loved the whole thing :D amazing.
^-^

Jessie Howard

talkalot9021

Written Jun 18 2010, 10:24 AM in Simple Sake of Sleep

"I’m all arms and fingers and hands
With angles that don’t make sense to the ruler," that line's amazing.
i really like this, it kinda makes you think a lot about what the human mind goes through when you're depressed and whatnot. i also like how this has like some sort of mystery to it, and then the ending is like *BAM*.

The Best Of The Last

bestoflast

Written Jun 18 2010, 06:07 AM in Simple Sake of Sleep

I can relate to this in several ways,the words have a bueatifull flow and an incredible deep meaning very well written ^_^

Brad Kindelberger

bradkin

Written Apr 25 2010, 03:43 PM in You Already Do...

Freakin loved it. I was grabbed at "Light behind your teeth" and the ending -- the last 7 lines or so are amazing.

Andrew Gallardo

chiyan

Written Apr 15 2010, 12:03 AM in Death to the Sun

hey,this one's great
the verse is perfect and connects through with each other

Andrew Gallardo

chiyan

Written Apr 13 2010, 11:43 PM in You Already Do...

Symbolisms.......
I liked it and read it again and again....