Patryk Komendera (nutshell)

nutshell

Patryk Komendera

25 years old
Member since Aug 25, 2011
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Jania Shaw

dreaming_forever_to_come

Written Apr 07 2016, 06:24 PM in Is it the End?

I enjoyed reading that, definitely left me with a chill at the end.

Jordan HitorMiss

jcashmon5294

Written Oct 14 2015, 05:38 PM in Is it the End?

Nice work bruh, I'd have to say I agree. Favorited.

Randi Donahue

rae11

Written Sep 20 2011, 12:40 PM in Her

ditto to both of the previous comment. I found it slightly hard to read. but absolutely could relate to it but "him"

H E

potentialthreat

Written Sep 14 2011, 12:47 AM in Why Live?

Fucking perfect. Had you ever read something that tells the same story as how youve been feeling for years?
This is definatley one of my top favorites!! If not the most, and to critique further,I found the ideas within this poem intoxicating, like I was rolling around in a huge watery ball, sloshed this way and that, this IS fantastic indeed.

H E

potentialthreat

Written Sep 11 2011, 04:29 PM in Her

I did like this, but It seems like some of your ideas were elaborated just a little too much, but that is not to say that I found this difficult to relate with. I would have used different wording, is what I mean.

S O

sandrao

Written Sep 11 2011, 01:51 PM in Her

so good...now i totally wanna meet 'her' lol...say hi to her, tell her she has a fan somewhere around the world.

Camillion Jones

sweetner218

Written Aug 29 2011, 04:03 PM in Why Live?

Suicide poems. Or suicide thoughts...Enthrall me
Being a depressed person myself I can relate.
I liked your wording. it was questionable. Not so bold to yell that you know all
But a question left lingering for all to ponder themselves♄
Fantastic work here:)

Jessie Howard

talkalot9021

Written Aug 27 2011, 04:29 PM in Why Live?

Very deep. Great thought process. But yes, people do value your life over theirs.
I know all too well what it's like to think about death and what would happen if I died, or how I thought it might just be easier if I was gone, but obviously, I thought better of it, and myself. I'm not saying you're suicidal or anything, but you should definitely consider the greatness you can experiance in life.
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