Jordan HitorMiss (jcashmon5294)


Jordan HitorMiss

23 years old
Member since Jul 08, 2010
Writes from Atlanta, United States
Has read texts.
Has written 44 comments.

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Jania Shaw


Written Apr 07 2016, 06:16 PM in The Dissonance of Love & Reality

Reminds me every time I get a serious crush lol. Loved it.

fabled briar


Written Mar 05 2016, 07:03 AM in Too Late

Damn good writing!



Written May 20 2015, 06:11 PM in A son's broken heart

Saddening. I hope things have gotten better for you these last 6 or so months.

The sexiest man to have ever lived


Written Jun 12 2013, 06:50 PM in Change in Scenery

I liked how it rhymed and had a very nice tone
I have no idea where you from but here where I'm hot, it's boiling outside by 11am so idk watchu talkin' bout willis

Blessing F


Written Jun 11 2013, 01:47 AM in Change in Scenery


Alinta Byr


Written Jun 05 2013, 06:03 PM in Hard to start

My favourite part is the first - "Type. Erase."

Leanna Johnson


Written Jun 05 2013, 03:39 PM in Hard to start

clever. c:

Blessing F


Written May 24 2013, 11:59 PM in To Be a kid

I know the feeling. nicely flow of words

The sexiest man to have ever lived


Written May 20 2013, 09:49 PM in To Be a kid

Your childhood days sound great señor, reading this *I* almost wanted to relieve your childhood joyfulness. Is that weird? Ehh naww.
My childhood was plagued with embarrassing moments of humiliation, ignorance, and domestic abuse LOL! ISN'T THAT GREAT???

Blessing F


Written May 19 2013, 01:51 AM in Abstract

creative way of writing.